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The Journey (Oveture)
Contributed by
Archie
on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:19:19 AM in AEST
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( Introduction;)
I see the river flowing through the land
and do we travel to drink water grand
that fills our souls with wisdom
to make choices more complete
and helps us find provisions in this life replete
I am missing
a voice to guide me through the storms to see
when I''m walking through the valley
I am groaning
hoping this pure water
will quench the thirst within me
when my energy''s deplete
( Verse 1)
I hear the flutt''ring wings of birds that fly
going to places far from me to hide
from the cold that pursues them, the winter
flying over me as I drink pure water
And I''ll miss them
they taught me great lessons
as I watched them
raise chicks with devotion
defending them from predators
stronger than them
they fly off for home fleeing the winter
The cold harsh throes of dark creep in my soul
trying to take me from my pleasant road
Telling me that there''s no joy in winter
"You'll lose the strength you had in youth. you sinner"
If I walk with a cane so be it
I can repent of my sin ,you liar
the battle rages on
but it is not my fight
you hate God the father
and his holy light
And so we travel on the road toward home
where we await our treasure to behold
The father''s face to see
he will dry all our tears
our journey is complete
no more darkened years
We sing this song alone together in my dreams
I sing this song with you together in my dreams
I sing this song alone on my journey home
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-09-05 05:19:19]
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Re: The Journey (Oveture)
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:59:49 AM AEST
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Archie, this is just poetically? marvelous. I like the way your honesty shines through with each live.
Thanks for sharing this.
Jane~ |
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Re: The Journey (Oveture)
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by sandypoet on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 07:43:28 AM AEST
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| wow.. so much you can take from this. YOu have to read it all to get the whole picture and then read it again to place yourself in it and find what a road to travel.. |
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Re: The Journey (Oveture)
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 07:50:22 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this excellent song
Best wishes always
from
kay P M-Devenish. |
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Re: The Journey (Oveture)
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:11:03 PM AEST
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A very effective rendition and synopsis of your life journey. The poem seems unique and very creative.
Good work
Will |
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Re: The Journey (Oveture)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:55:37 PM AEST
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A remarkablely written song you have here Archie. You captivate the reader right throughout the song. The imagery used is sensational. Thanks for taking us on this journey.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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