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You ought to know
Contributed by
JenJen
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:36:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You ought to know
How I really feel
Youve seen the signs
Youve read the poems
Yet you still dont understand
Ive told you my true feelings
Yet you push it all always
Ive been honest with you
Ive even helped you out
You ought to know
How I really feel
Youve seen the signs
Youve read the poems
Yet you still dont understand
Youre not bad looking
You have a sense of humour
You make me smile when in sad
We have a laugh together
You ought to know
How I really feel
Youve seen the signs
Youve read the poems
Yet you still dont understand
Maybe I should give up
Ill never get you
Youve gone out with a mate
I could never do that to her
You ought to know
How I really feel
Youve seen the signs
Youve read the poems
Yet you still dont understand
I wish I could get it through
That I cant have you
Its time to face the truth
I will never be with you
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-09-05 05:36:08]
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Re: You ought to know
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:02:32 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem. It's straight to the point and I can really relate to it. Nice work. :-) |
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Re: You ought to know
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by Archie on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:20:43 AM AEST
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| Great poem. If your poems do indeed speak about you then a person should know you espceiallly on this site. |
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Re: You ought to know
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:56:52 AM AEST
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A very honest poetry. I love poetry like this one. It's shows honesty and the in depth emotions of the writer.
Thanks for sharing this.
Jane~ |
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Re: You ought to know
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by sandypoet on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 07:39:22 AM AEST
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| Work so hard to get someone to understand that you care and want more from them and they look at you like they just dont get it.. hard times when it is like this.. you wrote it well.. |
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Re: You ought to know
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by veenu on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 07:51:50 AM AEST
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i like the last para
i wish.......................
,................................
............................
..............................with u
all is good
but in last u clicked
thanx for sharing |
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Re: You ought to know
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 04:19:11 PM AEST
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| sad and heart breaking. good write jens |
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