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Snoopy Dragon Visit's The Dentist
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 01:41:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Poor old Snoopy Dragon, he had a dreadful ache
And because of all his pain, an awful din he'd make
I won't go to the dentist, he cried and cried again
Bur yet young Snoopy had to go, his cries were all in vain
He tried to sit inside the chair, his tail was in the way
"You won't get chance to touch my mouth, I'll come another day"
"Now Snoopy don't be silly, I need to look inside
So come out of that cupboard, your far to big to hide
At last Snoopy is captured and has to show his teeth
The dentist wipes his brow now with a feeling of relief
When suddenly a flame shoots out oh! deary me oh! gosh
The poor old Mr Dentist is minus a moustache
There's such a huge commotion and Snoopy still in pain
Decides to get it over with and opens mouth again
There, it is all finished, at last the deed is done
The tooth is out in just a flash and now the pain is gone
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gwenevere
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Re: Snoopy Dragon Visit's The Dentist
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by Archie on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 01:44:45 PM AEST
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| Great write. This one should be illustrated. It reminds me of an episode of Dragontails |
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Re: Snoopy Dragon Visit's The Dentist
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 02:14:32 PM AEST
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| Hm okie dokie. A good poem. |
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Re: Snoopy Dragon Visit's The Dentist
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:01:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful ros a nice flow to it, easy to read and enjoy . . .
Ben |
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Re: Snoopy Dragon Visit's The Dentist
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:09:05 PM AEST
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Phew!! Wish it were that easy!!
(suffering from a toothache right now)...
Lovely write...
Jenni |
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Re: Snoopy Dragon Visit's The Dentist
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by remote on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:02:52 PM AEST
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| Very enjoyable read. |
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