|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Journey of Hope
Contributed by
evilfairy
on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:11:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
A thousand nights without a shoulder
To sleep away my dreams
Its only now that I am older
That Ive learned to dull the screams
Ive wandered through the darkness
And Ive run toward the light
A journey with no progress
An end thats not in sight
Ive wasted years on a life
But Ive lived for just a moment
Hovering at the edge of a knife
Afraid Ill fall into torment
Loving like Ive always been hurt
Hiding from my greatest desire
Groveling like a convert
Praying for someone to light a fire
Desperation keeps me clinging
To a hope that is hollow
Hoping one day life will bring
A path that I can follow
MW 06.09.05
Copyright ©
evilfairy
... [
2005-09-05 23:11:22]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Journey of Hope
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:19:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Awesome write.....very intense and emotive.
I loved your choice of words, very descriptive and diverse......wonderful effort.
I am certain you will find your well-awaited for path.
THis one's a winner!
Great job |
|
|
Re: Journey of Hope
(User Rating: 1 )
by MadCackle on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:24:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| reminds me of some of my older writing nice writ "I've wandered through the darkness And I've ran toward the light A journey with no progress An end end thats not in sight" I can relate to this verse as I feal I am wandering a bit in my life atm not sure of the path that i should take. I enjoyed this writ alot |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
