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Paradise
Contributed by
youlied
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 01:44:20 AM in AEST
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Every night, before I drift
Into artificial dull dreams
I see something real
A memory
Of crashing waves
The setting sun
Complete perfection
We danced in the sea
Our bodies swaying
As one
With the tide
And with each other
My mind existed
Solely in that moment
To drift
Would be to end
All sublimity
But the passion lived on
Dreaming is empty
After encountering bliss
But if ever the emptiness
Of superficiality
Becomes all too much
To bear
My thoughts will stray
Taking me to the ocean
Where I can breathe the night
At any time of day
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youlied
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2005-09-06 01:44:20]
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Re: Paradise
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 02:31:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!
Astounding piece of poetry, truly.
The beginning just reeled me in so tightly.
"Dreaming is empty
After encountering bliss".....
awesome expression.
I like your conveyance of this tender memory.
Excellent.
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Re: Paradise
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by remote on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 03:14:48 AM AEST
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