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precious angel
Contributed by
ladymae3
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
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Look u've made me cry.
Ur precious angel wants to die.
Is this how u want it to be?
Is this wat u want 4 me?
Look U've made me bleed
ur precious angel in need
do u want me to go?
if not please let me know
Look u've made me pick up he knife
ur precious angel gone, will u cry?
did u really want me to go this way?
if not i love u is all u had to say..
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2003-01-16 06:20:00]
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Re: precious angel
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:46:51 AM AEST
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Lady,this was really deep,Saying I love you comes from the heart its the hardest thing to say,
but when you mean it it comes easy! Christina |
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Re: precious angel
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by ladymae3 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:56:13 PM AEST
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| thnx, this is one of my favorite poems ive written. its about my dad. i dont get to see him ever, and i have a stepmother that hurts us. he hasnt been there, and he likes to pretend everything is perfect, but in the end it wont end up like that. |
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Re: precious angel
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by Steve_Class on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:03:11 PM AEST
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| Taking a string of bad words and at the end add brilliant. I was almost there, but obviously not. |
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Re: precious angel
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:33:34 PM AEST
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| This is crap. If you want my honest opinion. . . just kill yourself and get it over with. |
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