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liar
Contributed by
loragoeshollywood
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:44:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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famous coffee stains and cold lips in dark allies.
its not what you said but how you said it.
"i''ll love you forever..." such faint words you whispered.
..but like i care now, a year goes by and you forget about me.
how dare you? it was me and you sneaking around on blunt rooftops
taking drags on those once tollerable words;but you dismissed that fact.
i still remembered you i still thought of you. you just wrote me off
beaten up from distant memories. whos gonna heal me now?
well i''ll be fine..watch as i write you back
cold and unreadable letters of hate
haha who''ll be laughing then?
watch as i slip this ring on and walk down that isle. promised again.
but this time im in charge. when you say forever..make sure you mean it this time.
its your grave your digging; and my heart your digging up.
this one goes out to you
may your heart burn and your passion drain for me.
goodbye "my love"
haha i have pitty for you.
-meee
(p.s. im a beginnnerrrr so dont make fun of my non sense making poetry. kthnx)
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Re: liar
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:58:56 PM AEST
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| I won't make fun of you. You did a great job with this. The ending floored me. |
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Re: liar
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:11:27 PM AEST
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You deserve no ridicule..this was an awesome comeback poem.
You go girl! (or boy lol)
I enjoyed the way you vented and it came across in a very powerful and emotive way.
"its your grave your digging; and my heart your digging up."
....Lurve that line.
Continue writing, you go talent!! ;) |
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