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Laters
Contributed by
lancaster
on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:00:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Have I spoken to soon
Or are you just in hurry too
Have I gone from your blood to your head
Or are those your fingernails yellow and dead
Have the words even left from my lips
Before you turn them to shreds
Or is that your compulsion that makes you so sad
Has one heart plus you not always equaled us two
Or has Pythagorean been reformulated to exclude
Am I not the envy of all that you seek to destroy
Or have you had your fill with the whips and chains and lover boys
Have I gone mad, possibly a tad
Or does this body just need an ice cold long bath
Who are you
Let out a scream
Or are you only allowed to sanctify my dreams
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Re: Laters
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:24:58 PM AEST
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| Great poem. You write with a lot of emotion. That shows by this poem. |
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Re: Laters
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 01:32:19 PM AEST
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This sounds like somebody hurt you, and I'm sorry if that's the case. Good job with this emotive write.
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