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Shoulders
Contributed by
bluesbaby811
on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:46:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The weight being placed on my shoulders
It gets heavier everyday
Feels like im carrying boulders
I need someone to take them away
Try to please you
Asked for more
So many things to do
Your about to break through my core
The weight on my shoulders
It just keeps adding
The fire inside me smolders
From all your needing
Its me you blame
When you cant confess
Its always the same
fingers point to me when your in distress
The weights always there
Its never going to leave
Its so unfair
Its so hard to believe
I always had to strive
to get what i needed
To control some of my life
Even though my heart bleeded
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2005-09-06 21:46:47]
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Re: Shoulders
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:11:36 PM AEST
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| I symphathise with you. It has taught me great lessons to give even when I am in need. People have given to me in my need not when I wanted then to but when i needed it. |
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Re: Shoulders
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by blondie_64865 on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 01:37:17 AM AEST
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| completely understand that feeling it's amazing how so much can be placed on one person while other walk around so weightless. great write |
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