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Bar times, and sipping Beer
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Was a crowed nite, at the local bar
Many were sitting and carousing , as usual.
Walked in, pulled up a stool, and ordered a beer
Same people, and same stale convos
Looked around, and thought........Why am i here?
So grabbed the beer.....went to the dark, dank corner..and sat.
There was only a juke box and a couple , of stools
No one else.no boring convos, nor ppl staring as you stroll, across the floor
just me and that music box...waiting to be played ;hearing and feeling and nothing else
I take a dollar, slip in the slot, and pick away
Find Pink Floyd.......Dark side of the Moon
Now I can sit back down, close the eyes, and listen.............
Only t o hear the words, of what is playing.nothing else
Take the beer, bring to my lips, and take the everlasting taste of that first sip
Finally........Just a time to sit and think.
Copyright ©
brew
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2005-09-06 22:40:03]
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Re: Bar times, and sipping Beer
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 08:39:13 AM AEST
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This hit home 4 me good old days when i played in bars very vivid i felt like i was right there order me a brew will u brew lol great
writting i enjoyed every word of it, like your style . . .
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Re: Bar times, and sipping Beer
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 12:26:18 PM AEST
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Ahhh yes, you took me there with you alright! Good bit of story telling brew...Hmmm is that why your nickname is 'brew?'
: )
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Re: Bar times, and sipping Beer
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:04:19 PM AEST
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Gotta love that Dayna-
..Pink Floyd..the selection you chose..
and sitting alone with those..thinking-
sipping a "Brew"..
Love that poem..
B |
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Re: Bar times, and sipping Beer
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by WAE on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:57:45 PM AEST
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Why is abstract? It makes perfect sense to me...LOL... With a few exceptions it applies to me... Very good narrating...
Good luck,
Alex |
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