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de face
Contributed by
igba
on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:12:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A mystery
surrounded by secrets
inside an enigma
sometimes pleasant to look at
ever changing
really revealing
at unguarded moments
making a mockery of mystery
has awesome powers
like nectar attracts a bee
so does a pretty face
affect the beholder
when young
a face unravels it's sensationality
enticing and intoxicating to look at
seemingly devoid of deceit
when age beckons
the face becomes old in sin
enabling straight faces to be kept
when harm is intended
due to lack of care
it appears without beauty
just look intently
u got it! Every face is truly beautiful
Copyright ©
igba
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2005-09-07 05:12:20]
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Re: de face
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 09:17:32 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Your ending comes up suddenly and the reader is left wanting to know how you reached this conclusion |
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