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Tomorrow
Contributed by
candysears
on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 09:25:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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All the tomorrows make
Sad times..
For the yesterdays is tomorrow
Faith...
Memories fade as tomorrow wear
On..
Here come the yesterday blues
Oh God..
Let tomorrow bring forth a
A better day..
Tomorrow has came & gone
What happen?
Yesterday is tomorrow so you
Lost another day..
If I could just put my tomorrows
In a jar..
To keep them anew,maybe I'll
Have a better
Day.............
I keep hoping for a new tomorrow;
counting days
Down....
After while there be know tomorrows
Because I've lost
All the yesterdays
Wishing for tomorrow to come for a
Better day!
I sit here watching the golden sunlight
Slowly shinning it's
Light..
Another tomorrow gone in to another
Yesterday...
Just where this will ever end,Lord i feel
Such strife
Let this day end...
I do think i'11 feel better tomorrow...
If you Please..
Tomorrow has change into yet another day
Yesterday...
The moral of the story is,live your
Life for today.......
Yesterdays leave such bitter sad
Memories
Even the sweet memories get chopped
Up with the sour...
Another tomorrow is
Not Promise
Copyright ©
candysears
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2005-09-07 09:25:42]
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Re: Tomorrow
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by Kano on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 10:55:30 AM AEST
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| Confused a little with a few lines in there but interesting poem thanks for sharing |
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Re: Tomorrow
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by WAE on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:49:46 PM AEST
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| I like your poem but while the beginning is very clear and sound, starting from its middle the poem gets somewhat confusing. |
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Re: Tomorrow
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 08:26:48 AM AEST
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| Wasn't really sure what you were saying here. Bit confusing to read. Kind of got the jist from your comment though and I agree. Live for the now.Live in the moment your at |
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