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Spring
Contributed by
mom11159
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Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 01:58:03 PM in AEST
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The cold and snow, are gone for a year
The gentle warmth, is finally here
The birds are returning home today
The children can finally, go out to play
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The feeling you get, when spring arrives
Puts a dazzle in your heart, a glow in your eyes
The sun is shinning oh so bright
It makes your day so very right
The flowers you see everywhere
The smell of the grass, in the air
Laughter you hear, excitement you see
As you run away from the bumble bee
The trees are blooming and turning green
What a wonderful sight, to be seen
The warm cozy feeling, inside of you
Is the season of Spring, coming through!
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Re: Spring
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:10:56 PM AEST
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| you know I love your work,,you are a tallented poet and a lovely friend,,even though you've gone dumb lol hugz Eddy |
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Re: Spring
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by WAE on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:35:21 PM AEST
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| Cheerful and sweet! Well done! |
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Re: Spring
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 04:25:11 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Everything will soon be turning orange brown and gold. The sentiment of spring still inspires me though. |
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Re: Spring
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by MadCackle on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 11:23:20 PM AEST
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| i loved the common spring events you chose to use in this poem nice writ it was a pleasure to read |
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Re: Spring
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:53:21 AM AEST
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this is beautifull light and airy so true 2 the heart . . .
Ben |
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Re: Spring
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:14:27 AM AEST
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Cathy, that is a wonderfully sweet write.
Thank you for sharing,
Tim
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Re: Spring
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:13:55 PM AEST
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Nice write.
huggs,
emy |
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