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All I Have To Give
Contributed by
jacobmanning
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Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 08:46:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You're the first thing I think of
Each morning when I rise.
You're the last thing I think of
Each night when I close my eyes.
You're in each thought I have
And every breath I take.
My feelings are growing stronger
With every move I make.
I want to prove I love you
But that's the hardest part.
So I'm giving all I have to give
To you I give my heart.
Copyright ©
jacobmanning
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2005-09-07 20:46:01]
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Re: All I Have To Give
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:10:44 AM AEST
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Very nice...simple and effective, with a good flow. If you haven't already, you should share these sweet poems with her : )
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Re: All I Have To Give
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by Archie on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:43:12 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Your simple words remind us of how we are to live for each other and not for ourselves. |
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Re: All I Have To Give
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:54:29 AM AEST
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| In full agreement with Scorp. 5/5 |
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