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Feelings
Contributed by
NoangelNohope
on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 09:23:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dont tell me
good bye just tell
me you love me.
no kisses for
later. it doesn't
exist. never has
never will. your
not here. some
nights i wish
later was now.
it was but i
lost it, like i lost
your midnight visits.
not approved but
welcomed. each
night i could
add a memory
to my box.
boxes upon boxes
are stacked in my
head ready to fall
ready to topple. all of
you would be gone
gone to me atleast.
so dont tell me
good bye. instead
heres to later
memories and
kisses
Copyright ©
NoangelNohope
... [
2005-09-07 21:23:01]
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Re: Feelings
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 10:44:14 PM AEST
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| i really liked this, it was heart-felt , simple and easy to relate to. the part about the boxes was original , i liked it. good job! |
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Re: Feelings
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 01:53:38 AM AEST
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| well done |
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