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You Are
Contributed by
Caged Soul
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 06:43:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are my lover, my lady, my queen
Without you in my life where would I be?
You are my sugar, the one I live for
Every time Im with you I just gotta have more.
You are the cause of stimulation,
Girl, you give me elevation.
You are my Nubian princess; I just love your conversation
Whenever Im with you, Im overthrown with relaxation.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2005-09-08 06:43:36]
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Re: You Are
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:05:57 AM AEST
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I liked it, very expressing, keep it up. cant wait to see more.
- Cassy |
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Re: You Are
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:15:44 AM AEST
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Short, simple and sweet. I liked this alot. I can see u doing more love poetry. Nice flow.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: You Are
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:56:15 AM AEST
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Hehe...I like it.
THought your words were very sweet...
"You are the cause of stimulation,
Girl, you give me elevation"..
that line was fun.
Well done to you! |
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Re: You Are
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 04:18:54 AM AEST
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Short and to the point.
A very sweet write. Nice work. |
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Re: You Are
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:15:34 AM AEST
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| That was so pretty! |
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Re: You Are
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by bobbyclay56 on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 07:30:28 PM AEST
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| Nice little poem but needs a little more feeling. |
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