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Asylum of my Mind
Contributed by
kerrah681
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:47:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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So if I'm just a catastrophe, a fallen soul from grace, why do i feel so disengaged? By being so bold I've already conquered and told all my stories of evil and life in displace. Now I've come this far without using the stars, but a wish I'll make to know my fate. Why can't I know or see a glimpse of whats to come when life is gone.....Will I still wonder and not be convinced, will I always feel this discontent. Will the tears I've cried be washed away, will the hurt Ive caused be mine to stay? And could Hell for me be just that, all the pain Ive inflicted coming right back? If this was true, how about you, would you look back in regret at all the lives that you've wrecked, and would it be fear that causes this peer back into your past where all your secrets clash. Or would it be sincere that allthough through fear you'd feel remorse as you closed those doors and got back inside the crawlspace of your mind. Its a place to hide where nothing coincides,no feelings of demise, and no tears are cried. Can it be that I may just be a refugee to my own insanity and we are all on earth to merely uncover its worth? Are we supposed to be finding just what keeps us striving, and living in sin on our personal whims while taking it all in stride with the hopes to someday confide in something much greater than you and I'd find. Will I even make it till death here on earth, inside have I died or something much worse? Has my soul stood so cold for too long to be freed? Will I make it to Heaven in spite of my greed, in spite of me, inside this disease? Will I be freed? In hopes and dreams I see these scenes of a "happily ever after", and in the end will I just grin, with the closing of this chapter? Or will I dance with shadows black in an eternity for the wicked, will i stand there,without a care, take my demise not act surprised, become the demon thats in my eyes? Will I still feel all the pain inside, will it go away in the afterlife? Maybe Hell isn't so Bad, at least it'd be over, the shame and the pity,the hating to be sober. If Heaven's so full of the good not the evil then why do I tremble with these thoughts I could bleed through....... I ache for me, I ache to see what exactly will become of me, Just one lost soul, with an endless hunger to see the truth through what I can prove, of whom I can find, to see through my stained and weary cries. I cant take a thing when I leave this world, to Heaven or Hell or so Ive been warned. Ill take my mind, cant leave it behind, I want it to stay and just go away.....
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Re: Asylum of my Mind
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by just-b on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 02:27:45 PM AEST
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| MAN!! You have put to words feelings so many only wish they could speak. Very powerful feelings and a strong yearning to know a fate that we all wish we knew the out come, but we just have to wait until our time has come.. loved it.. |
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Re: Asylum of my Mind
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:29:55 PM AEST
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OMG!
i wish i had talent like u! this poem rocked my sox! everything i always wished i could put into words and u just did it and very poetically! SO SO SO frikkin awesome! |
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Re: Asylum of my Mind
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by Lancaster on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:39:13 PM AEST
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this was something else... really
there is nothing i can say to do justice to how good this is....
really amazing |
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Re: Asylum of my Mind
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:09:23 PM AEST
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Amazing write! Your skill leads me to think that you're probably not of this planet ( in the most poetically nicest way possible) You have an extremely clever use of rhyme and well thought out inquisitiveness as well! It's really beyond words to describe the depth of the what you've writtten here... i wouldn't be surprised if you haven't been published in some place or another.
keep up the extra fine writing!
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Re: Asylum of my Mind
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by Lin54 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 04:20:31 PM AEST
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I can see your confusion--I see it a lot here in my home. You are being honest of how you feel--I wish I had answers--but I can only listen and be there. Thank you for telling me about your writings and poems!
Linda |
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