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Mike
Contributed by
AssassinatorGirl
on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:48:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A creak and a pull
Watch the turning gears
Struggles in my hold
Open-eyed with fears.
Again I tame me,
Wild beasts inside
Raging up to be
Power hungry genocide
of any who dare try
to break me up.
Nothing more of wants to die
Death, I've had enough.
Pull me through your head,
I want to feel alive.
He makes me his in bed
I do feel great with him beside.
Nothing greater, nothing less
Time existing in with bliss
He has cleansed me of my mess.
No more feelings fall amiss.
My logic is clean,
Of course I'm in love,
I don't go unseen,
There is no one above.
Copyright ©
AssassinatorGirl
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2005-09-08 17:48:54]
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Re: Mike
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 06:14:54 PM AEST
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Well, this came across a little abstract, but I could still feel your loving thoughts...I like the 'no-frills' type way you wrote this in...
Nothing overly done up, just straight love and emotion. Keep it up!!
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Re: Mike
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by sek-c-shaun on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:25:00 PM AEST
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| could use some work but it shouldnt take u long u have potential |
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