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Delectable Tasting
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I sense greatness brewing
Braveness looming
Cant take this
It keeps moving
Compensate
And one looses
I sense urgency
In the words you are saying
An emergency
Imminent
And so you are praying
Irreversible pigment
And so you are enslaving
I sense change
And so I am applying
My every effort
Into complying
With exact directions
Written on the box
With precise application
As to not miss a spot
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Copyright ©
Lancaster
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2005-09-08 20:33:38]
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Re: Delectable Tasting
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:19:06 PM AEST
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| i love the way you wrote that it really is unique thanks for the thought |
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Re: Delectable Tasting
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by MadCackle on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:58:06 PM AEST
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| unique writ i enjoyed it |
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Re: Delectable Tasting
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 01:39:57 PM AEST
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I like the flow to your words in this write, and the sense of positive change there seems to be.
I'm sure there's plenty of 'greatness brewing' from you : )
H.S. |
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