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Miracle
Contributed by
toserious2
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Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 11:58:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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An acute doubt leads to change,
And doubted faith writhes in rage.
Songs of life: indefinite and vague.
Incur some death: absolute and grave.
River Nile is eager to rip;
To tear its breast by click of stick.
Some silence in course of calls,
As hope of sailor at loss of oars.
Converse of nature is birth of wonder
Wins a sneering smile of lovers sighs.
Scratched minds in pursuit of Why
Sullen hearts, showered with wrath
Fire of love in sea of blood
Project some age: miracle.
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Re: Miracle
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by remote on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:35:03 AM AEST
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| Wonderful imagery and equally wonderful read. |
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Re: Miracle
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by tonydread on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:54:12 AM AEST
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| very good |
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Re: Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:52:23 PM AEST
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Extremely well written, I enjoyed reading, keep it up, can't wait to see more.
- Cassy |
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