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Passing Train
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 01:29:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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while sitting in class
thinking about the next assignment
I heard the train go by
whistle screaming a warning
'Get off the tracks!'
and the deep bass 'thump'
of the wheels hitting the cross ties
i could just picture it going by
black and yellow with a big nose
running as for dear life
preceding miles of boxcars
speeding by, dragged along by the catches
like a child holding on to its mother
full of cargo, covered in graffiti
in all colors and shapes
i hope they're happy about the mark they left
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kailadragon
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2005-09-10 01:29:03]
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Re: Passing Train
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 11:34:51 AM AEST
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Hey, that was just brilliant. I just love this poem.
The feeling of the over-all write was just inspiring. I like it when reading inspires poets, seeing or hearing something.
This was a wonderful, thanks for posting and sharing this fine poetic work.
Jane~
(Who really thinks this poem should get a lot of comments)
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