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Stay True
Contributed by
kerrah681
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:30:22 AM in AEST
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Who really knows the evil that so deeply lurks inside of each of us?Is it caused be the pain that holds a piercing cold stare,so devious.The darkside of our souls is where the evil all grows then the sunshine in our hearts is slowly taken apart.Now prisoners we are,trapped inside our minds,day and night tried to fight but we're still looking blind.We question the future,look back on the past,just searching for ways to make time simply pass.We wonder about living and we don't want to die but will Heaven even take us if we're still lost and so high?What If I died in a state of confusion,I'd never know what was real or just an illusion.I pray to God for some answers,just give me a clue that would show me the way and what I should do.If I have to continue in this world I hate,just once I'd like to have a peaceful mind state. So my eyes looking forward and my head held up high,I take a walk towards happiness,hope I end up in the sky.If I end up down below and the devil wants to know how I got there and why, I'll tell him I was weak,the pressure too much so I chose to die.Inside of every soul theres the power to take control,if you want something strong enough eventually it unfolds.Be true to yourself,and nobody fails,stay true to your heart and you can be nothing else.......
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Re: Stay True
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by heartquake on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:52:31 PM AEST
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| great write... I love free writes like this |
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Re: Stay True
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:54:21 AM AEST
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| I liked this. Nice job, deep thoughts. XOXO |
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Re: Stay True
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by Archie on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:52:24 PM AEST
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I agree with you. Thanks for the advice.
Your write was cool to read |
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Re: Stay True
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 07:02:54 PM AEST
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WOW
ur liek one of the best poets Ive read poems of on here. I love the way your thoughts are so free and the way your mind works. Love this poem so much! Luv, Kortnie |
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Re: Stay True
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:05:23 PM AEST
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| I know this is the second comment i am making on this, I still agree with this but i see more in it than i saw the first time and must add; "Not all roads lead to heaven evn those that seem true" it is unfortunate that in this life some will not search to exhaustion to find the answers they need to answer the tough questions about life. Anything less leads to sentimentality, I want something more. |
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Re: Stay True
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by Lin54 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 04:26:29 PM AEST
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Again--I sense your hurt and confusion. I've only one way to reach when those feelings creep in around me and that is to the Lord. Even when it takes lots of crying out--in the end I know He's still there and knows the rejection and pain.
Lin54 |
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