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Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation
Contributed by
rockergirl94
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 12:50:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You said youd come tomorrow
I guess tomorrow never came
I sat for hours at the bus stop
For hours and they stretched like your smile on a rainy day
Oh but you have such a lovely smile
I sat here at first with anticipation
At end next to the tattered man without a place to call home
Who was by the way in quite a catchy state of hopelessness
But today you werent here to melt it all away
I was mumbling for a while
About flowers and love and other charming things
I was trying to remember why I was still there
And I was trying to convince my feet not to simply run away
Hopefully theyll take root or at least rest for the time being
I never did see you that day
Im sure that Id recognize those bright blue eyes
Captivate by even the thought of your smile
And maybe Ill be here again tomorrow
Sitting here reminds me that there are things worth waiting for.
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rockergirl94
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Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:18:08 AM AEST
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I really like reading your poem....it was just so warm and sweet.
I so know what it's like to be in eager anticipation of seeing the one you love....and just thinking about it all day ahhh lol.
Lovely thoughts...
"And maybe I’ll be here again tomorrow
Sitting here reminds me that there are things worth waiting for."
...wonderful ending.
A real joy to read!
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Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:54:30 AM AEST
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I really love this. Reminds me of me in my youth. There is nothing at all wrong with flowers and love and dreams and beautiful blue eyes combined with a to die for smile. I love sweetness for that is so lacking in our lives. Don't lose it. Hang on tightly to it and keep believing, for in spite of heartache, it will be worth waiting for. Truly it will.
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Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation
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by remote on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 05:32:47 AM AEST
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| Loved the title and the last two lines, rest if it highly forgettable. |
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Re: Wandering Thoughts Makes For Good Conversation
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:41:33 AM AEST
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Loved it...all of it...you have wonderful talent...looking forward to seeing more of your writing
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