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He's My Brother
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 03:34:53 AM in AEST
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Born from different parents
Our skin is not the same
Grew up in different places
Didnt even know his name
We never met till boot camp
There training night and day
We formed this mighty bond
That none can take away
Sent to fight for freedom
Afghanistan and Iraq
No matter how fierce the battle
He always had my back
And now he lies there broken
Hes left this world for another
In my arms Ill take him home
He aint heavy, hes my brother
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2005-09-11 03:34:53]
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Re: He's My Brother
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 04:17:30 AM AEST
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Tragic write indeed..
The ending was astounding and truly touching...
Well done. |
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Re: He's My Brother
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 02:27:17 PM AEST
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Powerful write here. Bonds forged to never be forgotten. He will live on in your memory. I do wish daily life and bonds could be forged like that here in our country instead of racism and bigotry. After all, we are all brothers and sisters in a way. Differences in each of us only makes life more interesting. You are a strong writer.
Blessings.
Rita |
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Re: He's My Brother
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:56:37 PM AEST
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Very good write,sad but good..
God Bless! |
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Re: He's My Brother
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by CarrieLynn on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 05:57:06 PM AEST
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my brother in-law is in iraq and i sent this poem to him. he just lost a really close friend over there and i thought it would mean a lot to him. its really neat and thanks for writing such a meaningful poem.
-carrie |
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Re: He's My Brother
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by ButchHoward on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 11:45:29 AM AEST
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The bonds of brotherhood, forged at boot camp, are so powerful and deep. They can never be broken. This testament to a fallen brother is deeply touching -emotionally overwhelming. Thanks for posting this gem!
-Butch |
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