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SUMMER LOVE
Contributed by
Sas
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Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:44:08 PM in AEST
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The sunset is an afternoon delight,
we watch the day slowly melt into night.
We are enveloped in soft summer love.
The graceful palm trees are swaying up above.
Miles and miles of diamond white sand,
you and I are walking hand in hand.
A flock of seagulls rising over the endless blue sea,
in my mind I create a memory.
Copyright ©
Sas
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2005-09-11 19:44:08]
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Re: SUMMER LOVE
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:56:13 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I've never seen the point to a summer romance...you have some pleasant imagery in this (albeit short) write.
Keep it up, and welcome to YPDC!
Scorp. |
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Re: SUMMER LOVE
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:13:47 PM AEST
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Good work Sas.
it brings back a week end at Daytona Beach which is one of my greatest memorys.
huggs,
emy
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Re: SUMMER LOVE
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by Brandyx7 on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:46:14 PM AEST
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| Ah, summer loves give a sense of comfront and then a give a sense of dreadness. Excellant imagery. And welcome to our site! |
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Re: SUMMER LOVE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 08:53:49 PM AEST
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| Mm, a very beautiful poem, packed with emotion, I could feel this one in my heart, a very strong write. SLipSiX. |
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