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my ignorance
Contributed by
streamingdreams
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 05:16:19 AM in AEST
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wedges, high heels
the looks that can kill
many around they laugh like they mean to
but at the end, they admit they are fools
resounding poundings of beats and clappings
my world's plainly spinning
and I can't foresee the happening
loved ones they talk and they leave me alone
I avoid their attention barely risking a groan
Retrace, rephrase the words and the steps
I can't seem to comprehend how to fill up the gaps
ugly damned shoes I have no idea why i wear
Pretty little heels work me into a little jealousy flare
i bat a blind eye
I curse they die
but what happen is
I just ignore and let them enjoy their
moment of bliss
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Re: my ignorance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:38:55 PM AEST
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Forced rhymes and inversions complete this nonsensical array of words. 'beats and clappings' ? What are 'clappings'?
Now after reading this, i think I may actually obey your instruction . . . |
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