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BECAUSE OF YOU
Contributed by
MsPrincessDiva
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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BECAUSE OF YOU
I CAN'T WIN
BECAUSE OF YOU
I HAVE SINNED
BECAUSE OF YOU
I CRY
BECAUSE OF YOU
MY LOVE HAS DIED
BECAUSE OF YOU
I'M ALL ALONE
BECAUSE OF YOU
I CAN'T PICK UP THE PHONE
BECAUSE OF YOU
I HAVE NO ONE
BECAUSE OF YOU
THE END JUST BEGUN
BUT JUST BECAUSE YOU DID THIS TO ME
THE NEXT PERSON YOU LOVE
WILL UP AND LEAVE
BECAUSE OF YOU.
Copyright ©
MsPrincessDiva
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2005-09-12 14:56:08]
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Re: BECAUSE OF YOU
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by WAE on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 03:05:37 PM AEST
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Sweet but you shouldn't use the upper case...
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Re: BECAUSE OF YOU
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by theimaginationofluke on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 04:24:17 PM AEST
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WOW!!!!! vry gd
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Re: BECAUSE OF YOU
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:49:49 PM AEST
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Well you certainly conveyed the anger and frustration here.
I think the Capitals served to illustrate it even more
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Re: BECAUSE OF YOU
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by JenJen on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:52:47 AM AEST
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very good the capitals make it sounds really angry and upset well done keep it up
jenni
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