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lost
Contributed by
judasman
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:19:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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clear the thoughts
visions from his mind
what once was reason
now left far behind
show him the light
he does so crave
that's taken his life
and left him in an early grave
Copyright ©
judasman
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2005-09-12 18:19:15]
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Re: lost
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:38:05 PM AEST
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| a simply sad poem. i hope your friend finds the way to a better life. good job on the writing! |
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Re: lost
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:01:10 PM AEST
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so sad...we tend to lose our way many times in life that leads us in so many different ways, but the things that your friend is learning from what he's experiencing will help in out when he gets back on track......everything happens for a reason...i know when i got off track then "got back" i benefited from the things that i learned and experienced...most do if they take it in and think about it...learn from mistakes too....
please comment on my work too
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Re: lost
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by Brandyx7 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:08:00 PM AEST
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| Excellant poem. Good feeling. Good diction. And it also has something people of any age can relate to and that is what makes a poem great! |
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Re: lost
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:32:20 AM AEST
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Short but defiantly heartfelt. Perfectly penned.
I wish you a gentle healing.
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