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One Phase Of Life
Contributed by
mckayla
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
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I have walked into your labrynth
without knowing which way to go,
I would follow my heart
but you have captured it and you tell me no.
So I stand in one spot,
and use my memories to guide me,but now their telling me I have been fought.
Now I rely on my mind,
which tells me to go to the right
now I found that I have been blind.
All the years it has taken me to get this far,
I am stuck in my tracks and my heart is still held in a jar.
I am sick of playing this game,
If only I had people standing behind me
and no one was to blame.
Keep my heart in a jar at the end of this mase,
my soul will soon find it
for this part of my life is only a phase.
Katherine Chaffee
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mckayla
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2003-01-16 23:00:00]
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 09:09:46 PM AEST
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| love your line,"Keep my heart in a jar at the end of this mase,".. great write:) |
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by OreO on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:09:09 PM AEST
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Katherine your words are so beautiful here in your poems...phases of life can come harshly and they can come with much joy as well.....thank you for sharing this one i enjoyed it as i have all your poetry and will look for more to come my friend....
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by WordPoet on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 02:42:42 PM AEST
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When we enter a phase that so totally captures our heart as you have described it seems as though our entire existance was meant for this very purpose. Nice poem and very easy to relate to. Keep up the good work...
Doug |
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:27:03 AM AEST
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| beautifully written... excellent imagery... |
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:42:00 PM AEST
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Excellent work....
Jenni |
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 07:13:05 PM AEST
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loved the imagery here ..great work
peace be yuor journey
terry |
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:15:46 PM AEST
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so much strength in your words, a lovely write...lots of imagery...you have many standing behind you, you should know...
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Re: One Phase Of Life
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:20:23 AM AEST
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| I like the way you made the 5th and 6th lines and the 16th and 17th lines deviate from the metre it drove home the points made in the lines |
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