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Ode to My Beautiful Flower!!!
Contributed by
R_G_Love
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Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:55:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ode to my beautiful flower,
So splendid, radiant, and fair.
I could gaze, upon you, for all my hours.
Your beauty is without compare.
I could shine, on you, with affection,
Shower you, with love,
For, to basks, in your perfection,
I place nothing above.
You have, quite the rapture.
Of you, Im just, in awe.
By you, Im, wholly, captured.
Im lost, in your, wondrous, splendor.
Your presence is such serenity.
To be around you, it is, just ecstasy.
Enamored, of you, utterly, I am.
I may not have seen nor been - at that place, but around you, I know, Heaven.
An ode, to my beautiful flower, till I gaze, upon you, once again
You are so Beautiful!!!
Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love
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Re: Ode to My Beautiful Flower!!!
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:17:29 PM AEST
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beautiful and so lovingly sweet:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Ode to My Beautiful Flower!!!
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by Maruna on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 05:15:31 PM AEST
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| Some nice rhyming and imagery there, but you might want to hold back a little on those commas ;) |
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Re: Ode to My Beautiful Flower!!!
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:30:13 PM AEST
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| good poem but i agree a little to many commas |
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