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Careless
Contributed by
SilentPwn
on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:33:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Frankly, my dear
Ive come to the point where I could just careless.
Theres no passion here, and Im living in regret.
I tease heaven with all my thoughts of suicide.
All the angels think I wont make it through the night.
Im sick of trying, hurting, feeling so alone.
Tired of dressing up everyday and seeming like a drone.
All these days just mix together, I cant tell them apart anymore.
I fall asleep easy tonight This has never happened before.
Maybe youre telling me how this tragic story will close.
What time is it now, How come no one knows?
Its a bumpy ride to wherever this journey is to.
My breaths are so short, faint and few.
Its those pills, the temptation got the best of me.
I thought itd help me feel like myself, so free.
But as I lay here, on my back in this bright room,
I see so many faces crowd around and assume
Im already gone. I can scream, but why cant you hear?
This is tearing me up, one of my worst fears.
I cant keep screaming its not helping me now.
The angels, they laugh and theyre laughing so loud.
I can hear you mom, yelling for me to come back.
But, Its hard to see you now, its all going black.
Its struck me Im dead, Ive never been more afraid.
I said I wanted to die, but I never meant this way.
My vision, its all dark now. And the voices, they seem to die.
I just cant believe it, how I didnt live through tonight.
Im feeling so vulnerable, I can hear or see nothing.
I cant feel my body now, nor the old familiar sting.
The blackness is overwhelming me, to point where Ive given-up all desire.
I know now, I wont ever see you again... because I feel like Im getting higher.
In my heart Im screaming for it to be yesterday again.
I never would have wished for this, please dont ever forget.
Copyright ©
SilentPwn
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2005-09-12 20:33:11]
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Re: Careless
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by R_G_Love on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:38:19 PM AEST
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| Very nice work!!! |
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Re: Careless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 10:08:28 PM AEST
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| Interesting. Good write. |
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Re: Careless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 10:24:12 PM AEST
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| wow, very powerful write. Hope that things get better for you. thanks for sharing |
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Re: Careless
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 12:32:56 AM AEST
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I can sense the sheer despair and desperation...you conveyed your sad feelings very well.
A sad one to read, hang in there friend. |
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Re: Careless
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:18:58 AM AEST
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| Wow. Terrifying and heartbreaking. Suicide can be so seductive for some, but your poem speaks to the truth about it. |
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