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Dance With Me
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 03:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dance with me, my love, my all
Dance beside the waterfall
As our fingers gently meet
Buttercups will kiss our feet
Dance with me, my hearts desire
I will set your lips on fire
Swirling, drifting, round and round
In the air, skimming the ground
Dance with me my own true love
Songbirds watch us from above
Singing songs so pure and true
Love songs, just for me and you
Dance with me amongst the tree's
Feel the rythm, feel the breeze
When we're spent, our dancing done
We'll make love and become one
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-09-13 15:55:17]
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Re: Dance With Me
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:11:43 PM AEST
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| Very heartwarming. Nicely Done! |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:17:29 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, Ros. It is magical like casting a spell on the one you love. It flows like a gently running stream to become a powerful waterfall at the end. It has a crescendo that is marvelous.
Blessings,
Rita |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Mild_Tempest on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:34:56 PM AEST
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| Absolutely astounding. Wonderful piece. I loved "I will set your lips on fire" Keep it up! |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 04:40:38 PM AEST
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wow, i especially love the ending of this one. great job with the rhyming, it's not always easy
keep up the good work |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 05:02:15 PM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful..I love this..
Jenni |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 09:16:07 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved reading that. Light worded and lilting, yet with a strong sentimentle feel. A beautiful dance it is. Well written and rhymed.
D.Sapelo |
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Re: Dance With Me
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by daprdan on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 09:36:17 PM AEST
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Wow... a kindred spirit... I'm glad to find another as passionate in their writings...
Your style is smooth and flowing, and your interests are so wonderfully varied |
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