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Pondering Of the souls inner meaning..........
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 09:42:23 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Too look around, and know that it is not all far
Is, like looking on that wondering star
its bright and shiny, and catches the eye
Makes, the heart, want to open, and pry
You deceide to do so, yet it may not be the best
For you may make the question, and not make the rest
So you ponder and wonder , is this the right choice
But, all along you knew it............and all was to rejoice
You took the path, that has opened new doors
Many has portals, and so much more
Laughter, and saddeness, is going to be there
But, to take the chance, yes it is, nothing but fair
So take what you know and is in the scared heart
Make this a fresh, vibrant, and beautiful start
Tell THEM how, YOU feel and you knew from a whole
Yes they are the one who is holding the gold
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brew
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2005-09-13 21:42:23]
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Re: Pondering Of the souls inner meaning..........
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 01:37:16 AM AEST
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delightful write
Michelle |
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Re: Pondering Of the souls inner meaning..........
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:25:03 AM AEST
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| Great poem. This is a lot harder to do than it is to say. |
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Re: Pondering Of the souls inner meaning..........
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:02:00 PM AEST
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Brew, I like ur style of writing it's different. A delightful and pleasant write which I throughly enjoyed reading.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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