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Flatline
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 10:07:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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...*Thump*Thump*...
the blood rushes through
pouring through soul
which is more black then blue
...*Thump*Thump*...
noise that i hear
racing my body
when no one is near
...*Thump*Thump*...
drowns everyone out
calls out my danger
incredulous shout
...*Thump*Thump*...
lets hear noise again
it speaks to the darkness
my unwanted friend
flatline------------------
no more moments have passed
I've finally found one
One moment that lasts
Copyright ©
spazz911
... [
2005-09-13 22:07:54]
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Re: Flatline
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
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| kc, i like the sytle of this poem, it's really cool and presented well. good stuff. |
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