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I love to bleed
Contributed by
Lollypopxcore
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 01:51:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Use this razor for my demise
see past the bloodstains in my eyes
wipe off the tears
and take a breath
this night, the night
i wait for death
As i feel it dance
it does no harm
As i smooth the blood across my arm
it feels so good
and looks like art
as i cause the pain to stop my heart
It's over now
I cut so deep
this pain, this pleasure
I love to bleed.
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Lollypopxcore
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2005-09-14 01:51:07]
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Re: I love to bleed
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 03:05:35 AM AEST
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I really love the poetical flow of it...it's excellently written!!!
Slitting is addictive.I hope you'll be able to get over it soon.
good luck
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Re: I love to bleed
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by colinbaker62 on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:57:16 AM AEST
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Very sad this one
Colin |
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Re: I love to bleed
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:12:40 AM AEST
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| this flows awesome |
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Re: I love to bleed
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 05:23:30 AM AEST
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This, I think, is your best written one so far. It flows, never stoping, until the end. It's sad though, and interesting. But don't enjoy the pain to much. Don't let it rule your heart.
Take care, I look forward to reading more of yours.
David |
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Re: I love to bleed
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by Rogue on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:27:23 PM AEST
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I really do this poem. It's a work of art and really capturms the way u feel and the way others may be feeling as well.
Keep up the good work, and feel better.
I know how u feel. |
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