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I Know Your Secret
Contributed by
WAE
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 02:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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I know your secret, my unknown friend.
I know what's hidden beyond the granite walls
You have erected to protect your ego.
I know the fears and doubts you keep so deep inside
Ashamed with ruthless stares of passers-by.
I know your heart and soul, your insecurity, your lies and hopes.
I know about everything you have in the labyrinth of your turmoiled mind.
I know what is behind the ever-changing mask
You wear more for defence than for deception.
I know. I simply know.
Copyright ©
WAE
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2005-09-14 14:43:45]
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Re: I Know Your Secret
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 04:26:08 PM AEST
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| A very interesting poem, I liked it. |
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Re: I Know Your Secret
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by gwenevere on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:47:15 PM AEST
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| a secret, how exciting, be sure you don't tell, Ros |
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Re: I Know Your Secret
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:58:35 PM AEST
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| Umm, are you stalking me? Heh heh. We all have our little secrets, I enjoyed this piece. |
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Re: I Know Your Secret
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:24:08 PM AEST
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Well a very interesting piece of poetry u have here. I like the way you've bought this across to the reader. All the secrecy and suspense. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: I Know Your Secret
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by LeahBeth on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 05:36:06 PM AEST
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| well, well, well, I think I have enjoyed this one more then all your others, yet, it disturbs me.....L |
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Re: I Know Your Secret
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by ruthie1983 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:55:28 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. I enjoyed how you put yo words together. Good job! |
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