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Reasoning with the Heart
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:56:45 PM in AEST
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It is the smile of life, that turns the frown to delight
To read , and know,....... it is such joy.....Makes the whole become reality
Seeing is beleivieng, and yes...........it is seen
For now , all i can do is wait , hope for passion
When I read , yes I make the heart become un bearable....
But then when an e-mail appears, it is enjoyable
You keep, the passion burning with words from the heart
I am knowing.............it was meant from the start
So take the scared that flows and make it not hard
Beleive......................It is happening and will continue
For you are the one, that can end.................................all
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Re: Reasoning with the Heart
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 12:55:16 AM AEST
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Hmm, I can only hope this is just a poem and you are not in a virtual romance unless it is right next door or down the street. Please trust me that they don't work, maybe 1/1000 and only lead to hearbreak. Be careful and know I am just worried. Not trying to interfer but I have been down this road and it gets really rough at the end.
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Re: Reasoning with the Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:25:34 AM AEST
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Nicely done, Brew.... Take it slowl, though..
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Re: Reasoning with the Heart
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by remote on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:31:30 AM AEST
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Attagirl! romance is good even if its virual, go for it. Anything that gives joy can't be bad. Although the writing above is little messed up.
-J |
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Re: Reasoning with the Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 02:31:25 PM AEST
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A most lovely write along with the sentiment in it's words, splendid peice of poetry, well done . . .
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Re: Reasoning with the Heart
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:46:30 PM AEST
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You go girl! Get it anyway you can...love is special, and anything is possible when it's the real deal. All the best. Nice sentiments in this write.
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