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Snowflakes
Contributed by
cherrycoke
on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 11:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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soft kisses from the sky
lying still in my angel form on the ground
I stare amazed at the beautiful scene before my eyes
in this state, the silence is company
by myself, but not alone
and I glory in my solitude
for no one else can share it
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snowflakes
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unique beauties of perfect white
awake children of young and old to a dream come true
each season they come
with memories of years before
returning youth to those who've lost it
these snowflakes are my blessing from heaven
for with each God sends His love in a gentle touch
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Re: Snowflakes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 03:32:15 AM AEST
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Awesome,
U should get bored more often as you've just discribed a peice of heaven.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Snowflakes
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:22:12 AM AEST
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Each season they come? Snowflakes?
If they came each season, then logic insists that you must live in one of the Polar regions, or somewhere very cold indeed.
Try to have your writing make sense.
N_F
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Re: Snowflakes
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by cherrycoke on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 07:22:13 AM AEST
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| thanks for your comment. i meant each winter season, but i guess i should clarify that |
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Re: Snowflakes
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by cherrycoke on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 10:05:50 AM AEST
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| comments?? :'-( |
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