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living shadow
Contributed by
wazarov
on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:02:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Undeniable desire to bleed
fulfilled painfully with love.
I drink the life touched by the divine
and taste the human wine..
Uncontrollable fire burning wild,
centuries pumping rust in the veins
my need to feed like a need to plant
your seed..
My compromised reality devouring
every hope to rest forever
reminding me of this eternity I didnt chose.
So beautiful is the night in which I rise
just to walk among the living gods..
The virgin blood comforting my haunted soul
and my fears strengthen my body..
I pretend to die just to watch the mortals cry
and when I rise I ask:
where is your god whom I want to fight..
I have failed to die, failed to cry..
so behold me coming for your blood
Copyright ©
wazarov
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2005-09-15 17:02:01]
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Re: living shadow
(User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:34:26 PM AEST
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Hmm... Interesting piece... Keep writing...
Alex |
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Re: living shadow
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by Shade on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:44:06 PM AEST
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| I usually don't like hungering for blood poems, but I really enjoyed this one. |
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Re: living shadow
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 05:48:00 PM AEST
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Wow!! Dean has risen from the dead!!
Great to see you posting again... Have missed you..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: living shadow
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by anitajames on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:26:57 PM AEST
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| Interesting, and somehow seductive as well. Reminds me of a vampire fantasy.... |
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Re: living shadow
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by visualizing_life on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:49:26 PM AEST
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i felt that it was abstract as well as dark, and you dont see that very often...i liked a lot...keep writing
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