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I'm Not OK
Contributed by
anitajames
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Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:13:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Fighting a losing battle
hiding in plain sight
trying to walk without legs
crying out of eyes with no light
clawing with bloody fingers
biting with jagged teeth
hearing without believing
praying with no relief
can't you hear what I am softly screaming?
I'm
I'm not
I'm not OK.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-09-15 21:13:05]
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Re: I'm Not OK
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by JHONEN32629 on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:35:14 PM AEST
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| I'ts a really good poem with lots of detail! Keep it up, I like it! At first I thought it was the " I'm Not Ok" song, by My Chemical Romance |
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Re: I'm Not OK
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 10:46:16 PM AEST
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| good poem. I can relate to this really well. You are not alone on this feeling. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. |
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Re: I'm Not OK
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by remote on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:12:40 AM AEST
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| Very dark, liked the ending. Well done. |
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Re: I'm Not OK
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by loopylou on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:57:59 AM AEST
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| ahhh i like it, i liked the ending best quite clever |
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Re: I'm Not OK
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by Ravensfire on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 04:13:37 PM AEST
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| Very emotional, very well written. |
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Re: I'm Not OK
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:50:43 AM AEST
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Very emotional and heartbreaking. You wept on paper to write this, your tears the ink.
Well done.
David |
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