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Dying Again
Contributed by
tetniz
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Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:48:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How could I possibly describe this pain?
Knowing I caused it doesnt help me stop the rain
And caught in this downpour I reached for her hand
Only to add my raindrops to the pain showering this man
I run away from where I had been safe
Exposed for what I am, naked from what the rain washed away
So scared of the storm I had weathered for so long
So confused by this storm, cant see right or wrong
No shelter in sight I huddle for survival
Closing my eyes and seeing her arrival
Realizing it was the best thing I had ever had
Now Im dying again, and it hurts so bad
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tetniz
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2005-09-15 23:48:29]
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Re: Dying Again
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by Twysted_Fate on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:03:41 AM AEST
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| I know it sounds generic, but you'll be better soon, but that was well written, and best of luck |
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Re: Dying Again
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by Lollypopxcore on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 02:36:42 AM AEST
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Very good poem.
Im very sorry for all it's worth.
xoxo |
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Re: Dying Again
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by loving_poet3088 on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:14:02 PM AEST
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| beautiful work, i like it alot it is very emotional and sad, and i like that thank you... |
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