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Too Late
Contributed by
Channing
on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:20:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit week after week
And watch you endure
For I am to weak
To be your cure
Plunging into darkness
To stop your suffering
To obtain your forgiveness
And feel you so lovingly
For I made a mistake
And now Im too late
None I can retake
Thus seals my fate
Copyright ©
Channing
... [
2005-09-16 01:20:40]
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Re: Too Late
(User Rating: 1 )
by Twysted_Fate on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 01:58:16 AM AEST
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| thats incredibly sad, though sure you knew that...very nice, good flow and all |
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Re: Too Late
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by freak98976 on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 03:28:54 PM AEST
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| Its short but it gets to the point. It seems like you are wasteing time and now it is too late to try and fix it. As the other one, this one is very nice. |
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