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one more time
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:55:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The silence of the void you left me in
the gittering of the stars above me
the darkness of the night
the coldness of the air
your not here
and im not there...
the whole world breaths in
the galexy spins
as i fall to my knees and plead
"just one more chance please"
because i know we could get it right....
....if you just try
....one more time
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2005-09-16 05:55:49]
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Re: one more time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:39:51 PM AEST
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awww.....*tear, tear*
i love it....very touching |
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