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First Encounter
Contributed by
Caged Soul
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:03:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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First saw him
one afternoon in spring.
We shared a lift, soon gazes, downward through different fazes.
We conversated, shared ideas, seamed like many years
it was meant to be; he shared him, I opened me.
Then he asked the question, with it I could see every intention.
Who was I to decline, I mean, everybody needs that first time.
We entered the townhouse on the square, it was there
that we made the universe blush
with our desires, bountiful and lush.
He opened my mind, freed my soul,
made me see things previously unknown.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2005-09-16 08:03:22]
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Re: First Encounter
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:24:18 AM AEST
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Hey, good for you for posting this! The structure of the poem itself could be improved here and there, but your emotions were honest, and shined through your words. In my opinion, it's nothing to be ashamed about...Keep up the writes!
Welcome to YPDC : )
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Re: First Encounter
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by brew on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:20:17 PM AEST
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Yor choice, your meanings............never hide anything when it comes to what you have, or feel. Its life. I cant be opiniated, either way. Not bad........
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Re: First Encounter
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:21:38 PM AEST
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Nice write. Good thought and word flow.
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