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Why Wish Write
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wish for words that speak to me
then I write what's become a part of me, you see; or
get a feeling in my soul who knows not me where end or start
all comes from deep within' my heart,
my love from far away may whisper me dreams
when I hear them spoken this inspires my heart it seems
though lately the heart has been so dark and musty
used to keep all my poems in a trunk so dark dusty
...'she wears her shades' it matters not if it be spring...
in deep,
oh, winter when people say the weather stinks, it heartens me
there is no better feeling to me than being secluded from the rest of the world
the constalations in their beauty shine
and darkness can touch this heart of mine,
when I reflect up here upon my life
it comes to me and flows so nice...
hide behind a beautiful denying face no more
must let these saved up things out the door
...door on my soul is wide open...
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2003-01-17 10:40:00]
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Re: Why Wish Write
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by nomad on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:06:28 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this is beautiful. Winter constellations gleaming, doors opening, and a wondrous soul opening. Beautiful! |
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Re: Why Wish Write
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:21:14 PM AEST
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| so that's where you've been hiding. I'm so glad you have emerged. I'm watching out for you. Come again soon |
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Re: Why Wish Write
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by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:37:25 PM AEST
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| Awesome write!!!!!......:-) |
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Re: Why Wish Write
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by mckayla on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 09:24:51 PM AEST
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I love the way you expressed yourself in this poem! great write
mckayla |
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Re: Why Wish Write
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by princesspurty on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 07:18:07 PM AEST
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| beautiful, and very well put, can relate in ways, thanks for sharing |
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Re: Why Wish Write
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 01:38:04 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful self expressed poem, Nessa. You write perfectly. *S* Cynthia |
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