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Dreams of Fire
Contributed by
Jyssvw
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Mischievous person
Preaching an approachable doctrine
Of virtue-
Personal and private,
As the soul is concerned
The heart beat is as vital-
As the blood that flows inside it
Dont make mention of intolerance,
I know the depression well.
As the hole in the ground-
And the new pride found
Combine for a conglomerate
Write it down
So it will forever be engraved
The fact that we were both here
Will always remain the same
Dry your last tear
As the clouds release their rain
And now that we are gone
The moon moves sadly to the dawn,
Carved with desire
Was this lasting song
And in each other
The dreams of fire, we used to rely on
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Jyssvw
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2005-09-16 17:23:28]
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Re: Dreams of Fire
(User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_K on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 07:47:57 PM AEST
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| Wow.. I really liked your poem. It held alot of depth to it, and alot of meaning inside. |
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Re: Dreams of Fire
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by brew on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:03:46 PM AEST
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Deep, very deep , and powerful write.! I loved the line, dry the last tear..............hmmmm yes, taking what was had, and trying to not.......Loved it.! Made me all know and feel , have been there...........
Brew~ |
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Re: Dreams of Fire
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:24:44 PM AEST
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This is a rather moving piece you wrote here jyss...the words sweep along effortlessly, and your emotion leaves an impact.
Some really good lines in this write too!
H.S. |
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