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get off your knees
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 05:30:21 PM in AEST
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strolling alone a lost soul is all i'll be
walking the world to see what i can see
death and poverty a word we all know
as the rich get greedy where is it where we reap what we sow
dangled fantasies float in front of our eyes
big tvs and shiny cars and buildings blocking the skies
as the powers corrupt we all take our cue
we hope all those will get what is due
but they punish the weak and the middle of the class
never really getting off the knees too busy kissing ___
they raise the price on entertainment and life
while slowly sliding in their knife
it's time to revolt time to tell the man
time to take an origional plan
this is my view and it really doesn't count
but it is time for a change without a doubt
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2005-09-16 17:30:21]
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Re: get off your knees
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 07:09:25 PM AEST
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| Bravo. You're absolutely right. |
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Re: get off your knees
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by oreo_kisses on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:32:36 PM AEST
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| awesome poem keep up the good work! |
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Re: get off your knees
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by Winterland on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 08:51:29 PM AEST
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Good job!
Jennifer |
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Re: get off your knees
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:04:30 PM AEST
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I do totally agree.
Rita |
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Re: get off your knees
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by brew on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:37:53 PM AEST
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100% agreed..................sad, tho. But, you know........thats the way life seems, to go.! Good , honest write
Brew~ |
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Re: get off your knees
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by True-to-the-Heart on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 08:34:47 AM AEST
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Thats really good
i definately agree
love the rhymes, the flow
everything
5 stars * |
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