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burned dreams of the dead
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 10:04:46 AM in AEST
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burn my last dream to the bitter ashes that are yours
seething hot in my head and trying your filthy little chores
baking that last batter of the worlds that collide
and deep in the tremor you 2 could never coincide
but thank you for the dreams i once had, turn to the word, defying my last breath
killing the last of my putrid essence and once holy vow to never lay dead
almost in a whirlwind of angst and misunderstood notations
i find my last hiding place in a quiet and descreet location
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2005-09-17 10:04:46]
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Re: burned dreams of the dead
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by Archie on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:37:53 AM AEST
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| Very strong words . . . I like the way you show what you used to have and what you have now. It is almost as if you were robbed of your dreams |
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