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Imagine
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 02:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Imagine
I can imagine us walking,
Down the sandy beach,
Watching the setting sun,
And watch the ending day.
I can imagine us together,
As I gaze upon your face,
As I sigh and fall in love,
And watch the ending day.
I can imagine us in love,
The world can do no wrong,
As we hold our hands,
And watch the ending day.
I can imagine us lying,
Down on a soft towel,
So I can stare into your eyes,
And watch the ending day.
I can imagine us kissing,
In a gentle embrace,
Filling in the coldness,
And watch the ending day.
I can imagine you and I,
In each others embrace,
I can imagine you and I,
Watching the ending day.
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Mild_Tempest
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2005-09-17 14:05:14]
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Re: Imagine
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 05:39:09 PM AEST
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This was lovely MT. Ah, being in love.
What euphoria! Wonderfully
captured here. Well done!
~Breezy |
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Re: Imagine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:24:25 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful! Being in love is a wonderful feeling. The line repition works great in this piece. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Imagine
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by ArsenicMyst on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:20:04 PM AEST
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hi there tempest ...
thank you for reading my offering
and your kind greeting ...
ive read all of your poems
it is awesome how much ground you cover
while remaining true to your style
tho the presentations are nearly the same
each poem and each thought is a journey
into originality and heartfelt intimacy
your clarity and honesty is remarkable
as well as a little bit disarming
yours is a valued lesson in skill
beauty and artful writing
*.¸¸.·´¨`*arsenic
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Re: Imagine
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:25:37 PM AEST
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Ahhh...I loved this... it is the type of poetry I like to read...and to write. I like to imagine stuff like this also...
Jenni |
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Re: Imagine
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by brew on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:38:21 PM AEST
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Well the imagery was romantic...........they must be loved, to all.! Its great to have that kind of one.and the heart, tells all. Beautiful write, to one who holds your.!
Loved it.........
brew~ |
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Re: Imagine
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by mjiann on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:53:49 PM AEST
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| flows together nicely. takes me back to good times. |
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Re: Imagine
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by blissful-ignorance on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 09:20:49 AM AEST
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thats a beautiful poem, and being in love is a wonderful thing. it so hard to express, but you did a great job. i love you poem
sincerely blissful-ignorance |
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