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Always Know
Contributed by
brew
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Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:55:17 PM in AEST
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How can you make a Friend, know you are there for them?!
You try and try, and tell them they can tell you anything
You sit and listen, and hear.........
Many things, have been shared, back and forth
Knowing each of you would never utter a single bad word against each
You capture, their feelings quiet, well
You know what it is to have been loved, and been torn apart
You explain to them, there is a new world down the path
There is hope
There is faith
There is always something bright, and will become clearer and clearer
Dont lose the "whole" no one is worth all of that
People come and go in ones life
To find the perfect match , will occur
Some may wait an eternity, it seems
And others wait a day
Do not try and make it happen
Love is not a chore
It is something that is cherished, and worth waiting for aimlessy
yes time, can make or break some
But yet, when in love .,,,,,Time can stand still
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Re: Always Know
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:59:31 PM AEST
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You are right of course! Sometimes Time just needs to stand still. Just for a while to let you catch your breath.
Love,
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Re: Always Know
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:31:18 PM AEST
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Loved this write, Brew...Well said...
Jenni |
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Re: Always Know
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:30:50 PM AEST
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Very lovely sentiment a most prudent peice of
writting . . .
Ben |
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Re: Always Know
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 06:58:56 PM AEST
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A cleverly crafted piece dearest Brew. You are right my dear, when in love....Time can stand still. I loved the way u brought this across to ur reader. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: Always Know
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:52:53 PM AEST
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people come and go
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true friendship remains elusive.....
well done |
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Re: Always Know
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:21:47 PM AEST
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Excellent write Brew...
I loved the line about love not being a chore.
Brilliant!
Jeff |
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Re: Always Know
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:56:29 PM AEST
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Truer words have never been spoken love-
If someone were to find love on their last day of life..
it would surely have been worth the wait I think.
B |
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Re: Always Know
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:12:47 AM AEST
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| a good thought provoking write ,I likee,,,Eddy |
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Re: Always Know
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:40:22 PM AEST
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Dont lose the "whole" no one is worth all of that
Hey brew, point well taken. Sometimes me thinks you are wise beyond your years. An awesome thought provoking write.
huggss, john |
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